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In a dim dungeon long I slept
As the town around me burned.
In a pale chamber long you wept
As waters above you churned.

For a madman thought he could make God
And gave a tainted child to you.
A son, poisoned by beast's blood;
You were the first he slew.

Your lethal child you loved, and though,
I fought for him to die,
When the brave boy's sword laid him low
Something stung my eye.

Through tort'rous chaos I am hurled,
Becoming something foul to see
But as you loved him who near slew the world
Perhaps, I pray, you might love me.
©2004-2009 ~FireFiriel
:iconfirefiriel:

Author's Comments

This is fanfiction poetry, from the point of view of Vincent Valentine from Final Fantasy VII. It's the first real poem I ever wrote, so please please don't be too hard on it! *imagines all the nasty comments she risks getting and trembles* If you have different feelings about these characters than I, please don't comment just to violently shout those opinions at me.

Characters, story copyright Square
Poem copyright me

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:iconzerachielamora:
Aww, that's wonderful! *has some tears in her eyes* Vincent is so sad...if only time could be reversed so it could all be made better.... :sniff:

Good poem! :D

--
Is maith an scéalaí an aimsir.
Time is a great storyteller.
:iconfirefiriel:
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it!!! *flies* Vincent suffers so much... I think that's why I like him. ^^ Thanks again!
:iconroraborealis:
Ooh, enjoyed it. Very emotional, though I dunno what it's about!
:iconfirefiriel:
Thank you very much, I'm very happy you like it! Once you get FF7, (and get a ways into it) you'll see what it's all about!
:iconcg-wolf:
that is one very very good poem. oo *Takes notes*
:iconfirefiriel:
Oh gosh. *blushes so much that passing automobiles halt, mistaking her face for a stoplight* Thank you so much, Grey.
:iconsonikki-valentine:
I love this it's really really good!!!
Keep up the great work! :+fav:
:iconfirefiriel:
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like!

--
The issue is clear. It is between Darkness and Light and everyone must choose a side. -G.K. Chesterton

I refuse to judge any person by his or her race.
That includes The Last Airbender actors.
:iconsonikki-valentine:
You're welcome!

And why wouldn't i like it?
It's great!

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